Brett

BrettPiece1- Permanent Separation - You must add this to the anthology. It sets us up to think one thing and sneaks up on us with the surprise reality in the last line. Meg BrettPiece2- This I Believe - I strongly identify with these images, so powerfully worded. don't change a thing, but do consider posting this for the anthology by copying it and adding it there. - Meg BrettPiece3- Summer Nights - wonderfully sensual and moving dipiction of a shared evening. Meg BrettPiece4- Dear Husband - Brett, this poem takes my breath away when I read it. Change nothing, but please post it at the link for the anthology along with My Daddy. -Meg BrettPiece5- My Daddy - The only thing you might change is the spelling of "gross", in "As for the fish, they were slimy and smelled grouse enough NOT to eat." -Meg