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Patrick- I love this piece; there are a lot of good laughs! I like how you describe the “spot” and the seating arrangement being a chess board. I also laughed out loud at the jackass part. . .;) Suggestions from the almighty poem writer, Brett: I believe the last sentence in the third paragraph needs reworded. Also, “ with under minutes to go.” That’s it! Thanks for sharing!