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Brett--What a fun poem! I love the way you lead us to believe this is about a marriage in crisis, and then hit us with the surprise ending. Well done--Nancy

Rachel--I really enjoyed hearing you read this to us, and reading it again just makes me chuckle inside. I was wondering about the punctuation on one part. In the part where you are listing places the ants are at, you have a comma after each one except for Laundry Room. Wasn't sure if that was an oversight or not. But I love it!

Meg- I was worried for your marriage the first time you read aloud this in class! I love the way you lead us blindly to the end and zing us with ANTS! What a release to laugh at the end! Brilliant!

Thank you! Rachel, I just noticed this over the weekend and am coming on here to fix it up!

Dawn-I have to say that I was with Meg the first time through, I was a little worried for you. Thanks for the laugh!

Adrienne--You use great voice in this poem. I especially like your use of capitalization to give a sense of yelling and the finality of the title.

Micki--I LOVE this!! I have the same HATE relationship with the little buggers myself!